Edit Chapter 1 And Chapter 2 Of Dissertation Please find all of the edit suggestions listed on the word doc and through the track changes. “I suggest only

 Please find all of the edit suggestions listed on the word doc and through the track changes. 

“I suggest only doing quant or qual not both.

Your problem needs to be further clarified and refined. Suggest you choose one purpose, the first one is better aligned with the problem. What is the population size, why do you choose the sample size you have, find lit to support your approach.”

“Please review my feedback and then please revise and ensure that you have completed the revisions for each aspect of feedback given by me and your Chair in each subsequent submission. Then resubmit using Microsoft word’s track changes feature so that all changes are tracked. Let me know if you have any questions.


You have alignment issues with your problem, purpose and research questions. Your problem needs to be exactly aligned with your purpose and both your problem and purpose need to be aligned with your research questions and your entire dissertation as well. 

You also have many places that are unsubstantiated, each assertion must be backed-up by literature and this goes especially true for your problem background and problem statement. 

You need to be singing in one voice throughout your dissertation, right now there is a lack of clarity about what your dissertation will be about. Until these issues are addressed, the rest of your dissertation can’t fall into place fully as your entire dissertation rests on these foundational elements.

Suggest you review other dissertations for their problem, purpose and research questions to get a sense of what alignment looks like.Your specific problem, purpose and RQs are misaligned.

Here is a link you might find helpful Problem Formulation — https://ecampus.phoenix.edu/secure/aapd/SAS/tutorials/Problem_Formulation/story.htm

Right now, there is a lack of clarity about what your dissertation will be about as your stated problem doesn’t meet the criteria in the DCA as to needing to have substantiation for the problem that is current, 5 years or newer.”

Ensure that you are using the correct terminology regarding what is a method and what is a design.

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